The Ocean, The Sand And The Sun
I close my eyes, and hear something enthralling,
As if the ocean has been calling,
Out to me as I sit here,
With my warm feet near.
The scorching sand does not help,
And I suffer and cry out and yelp.
I suppose the Sun and the sand are good friends,
As their mischief never ends.
The king’s castle I made was knocked down,
By the naughty ocean who laughed at my frown.
Then she called me over to swim,
And I did so until the lights went dim.
What an amazing day it was, right?
With the ocean, the sand and the Sun so bright,
I could live here forever.
By Dhruvangi Punetha
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The Ocean, The Sand And The Sun
A very good & nice poem depicting the relationship bw sun, sand .
Very nice & thoughtful portrayal
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A very good and nice poem depicting the
Relationship between sun , sand.
Very nice and thoughtful portrayal